Haiku ~ November Breeze

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November breeze
a faint whisper
rustling leaves

Comments

rainfield61 said…
An interesting short piece. November is around the corner.
October 18, 2009 at 4:11 PM
WillOaks Studio said…
That's lovely!! I tried my hand at photo and haiku today as well. Maybe it's the season for this? But I did use more syllables so I'm not quite sure if mine is a "real" one or not...ha ha!
October 18, 2009 at 5:39 PM
Autumn Belle said…
I'd like to stay here for a night and listen to the music of nature. I'm sure the breezes are fresh and cool here. How nice to be awaken by the sound of chirpy birds the next morning under the canopy of such great green trees.
October 18, 2009 at 10:07 PM
lina said…
Rustling golden leaves... now that is a lovely sight. :-)
October 19, 2009 at 1:07 AM
Angela said…
Very pretty. I'm not very good at Haiku, or following rules for that matter, so I'm always impressed by someone who can:)
October 19, 2009 at 2:47 AM
Ann said…
What a peaceful looking setting. Love the photo and the haiku
October 19, 2009 at 4:16 AM
Rick (Ratty) said…
I can almost hear that breeze as if it were real. I love that picture because of the mystery it presents to me. Just a hint of the trail, and even the shed is a mystery to be explored.
October 19, 2009 at 4:36 AM
Margie said…
Beautiful photo and haiku!
I really have enjoyed going through some of your posts.

Margie:)
October 19, 2009 at 8:22 AM
Bangchik and Kakdah said…
The picture has the setting to carry through the short haiku..... Lovely!! ~bangchik
October 19, 2009 at 8:47 AM
Anonymous said…
Completely beautiful!
October 19, 2009 at 12:37 PM
Joanne Olivieri said…
Carmen, Thank you.

Chuck, Thanks so much.

Rainfield, yes and I can't believe it's already here.

WillOaks, it may be the season. Actually the 17 syllable haiku is the western version of the traditional Japanese which is what I wrote. They're all real and good. I'll check yours out today.

Autumn Belle, Ah yes, you've written a poem in itself. Thank you.

lina, thank you so much.

Angel, thank you for reading and commenting.

Ann, it is so peaceful there and I am always inspired by that setting. Thank you.

Ratty, I love the way you always see the beautiful details.

Margie, thank you so much.

Bangchik, your comment is very much appreciated.

B.Held, Thanks for your kind words.
October 19, 2009 at 2:10 PM
John | English Wilderness said…
Hi Joanne. I'm not usually a fan of Haiku, but "November Breeze" is a fantastic example. :-)
October 20, 2009 at 1:06 AM
Joanne Olivieri said…
John, thanks so much for your kind words.
October 20, 2009 at 1:28 PM
R.S Mallari said…
Nice one Jo, I wish could make such deep poem with three lines.
October 24, 2009 at 4:18 AM
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