Haiku ~ November Breeze




November breeze
a faint whisper
rustling leaves

Comments

rainfield61 saidā€¦
An interesting short piece. November is around the corner.
WillOaks Studio saidā€¦
That's lovely!! I tried my hand at photo and haiku today as well. Maybe it's the season for this? But I did use more syllables so I'm not quite sure if mine is a "real" one or not...ha ha!
Autumn Belle saidā€¦
I'd like to stay here for a night and listen to the music of nature. I'm sure the breezes are fresh and cool here. How nice to be awaken by the sound of chirpy birds the next morning under the canopy of such great green trees.
lina saidā€¦
Rustling golden leaves... now that is a lovely sight. :-)
Angela saidā€¦
Very pretty. I'm not very good at Haiku, or following rules for that matter, so I'm always impressed by someone who can:)
Ann saidā€¦
What a peaceful looking setting. Love the photo and the haiku
Rick (Ratty) saidā€¦
I can almost hear that breeze as if it were real. I love that picture because of the mystery it presents to me. Just a hint of the trail, and even the shed is a mystery to be explored.
Margie saidā€¦
Beautiful photo and haiku!
I really have enjoyed going through some of your posts.

Margie:)
Bangchik and Kakdah saidā€¦
The picture has the setting to carry through the short haiku..... Lovely!! ~bangchik
Anonymous saidā€¦
Completely beautiful!
Joanne Olivieri saidā€¦
Carmen, Thank you.

Chuck, Thanks so much.

Rainfield, yes and I can't believe it's already here.

WillOaks, it may be the season. Actually the 17 syllable haiku is the western version of the traditional Japanese which is what I wrote. They're all real and good. I'll check yours out today.

Autumn Belle, Ah yes, you've written a poem in itself. Thank you.

lina, thank you so much.

Angel, thank you for reading and commenting.

Ann, it is so peaceful there and I am always inspired by that setting. Thank you.

Ratty, I love the way you always see the beautiful details.

Margie, thank you so much.

Bangchik, your comment is very much appreciated.

B.Held, Thanks for your kind words.
Hi Joanne. I'm not usually a fan of Haiku, but "November Breeze" is a fantastic example. :-)
Joanne Olivieri saidā€¦
John, thanks so much for your kind words.
R.S Mallari saidā€¦
Nice one Jo, I wish could make such deep poem with three lines.

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