Dark Summer on June 14, 2009 Get link Facebook X Pinterest Email Other Apps Dark SummerMy senses numbas blistering raysseep through my skincold as icestinging my heart.In limbo I residewhere tears are my comfortreleasing the painlike brilliant starslighting the darkness. Comments rainfield61 said… It is summer, it is sort of weather in Malaysia. Jena Isle said… This is an awesome work of art. I like the verses. •°°• IcyBC •°°• said… Beautiful words, Jo! You didn't have to say much, but I can feel it.. Joanne Olivieri said… rainfield, really is it just during Summer or all year long?Jena, Thank you very much.Icy, Aw, thank you. Rick (Ratty) said… Good poem. I pictured a cartoon of someone crying in all directions, and the tears reflecting the surrounding light. Joanne Olivieri said… Ratty, You have an incredible imagination :) bessye said… Joanne,I pictured more of a reflection on moments missed. Maybe even on hurts that were wronged, but whomever chose to correct them their way.Very nice work, well written!Bessye Joanne Olivieri said… Bessye, you are very insightful. Thanks so much for reading and commenting.
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Jena, Thank you very much.
Icy, Aw, thank you.
I pictured more of a reflection on moments missed. Maybe even on hurts that were wronged, but whomever chose to correct them their way.
Very nice work, well written!
Bessye